Great product copy but needs proofreading....
Great product copy but needs proofreading. "..when you here the roll of thunder..."? UGH. That would be "hear." And "its" possessive does NOT get an apostrophe: Should be "its compact pocket." Your copywriter is clearly gifted and highly skilled, so I assume these little booboos are an aberration. -- Sincerely, a fellow e-commerce copywriter ;) P.S. The word "proofreading" in the comment title should have a "g" at the end; the system cut it off, and I can't get it to insert it. OK, so I'm channeling my Inner Schoolmarm. So sue me.
I'm a totally grammar snob, and seeing someone else who mentally proofreads while reading terrible descriptions helps me feel more normal. Thank you.